I do some one-to-one tutoring, and I'm never sure how successful I am at it, so this was an interesting lesson. If only I had read Ryan and Zimmerelli before!They identify a lot of the issues I was having, wanting to make a perfect piece of writing, but not wanting to lead the student, or write it for them, I sometimes felt that I was making the student more confused.
For example, a student studying GCSE english had to write an essay on the Tempest. Before she started we talked through the question and what the student thought she was going to write and I helped her form a structure, asking her identify her arguments and pick out quotes she thought would work with that. I then asked her to do a draft of her essay for the following week so we could look at it. I think as a tutor I talk too much, this pupil in particular is a 'smile and nod'er and, wanting to help and earn my wage, I fill the gaps too much, get too excited by an essay (which I think I forget that I'm NOT WRITING) and lead her to conclusions she might not make. This is backed up by the bits of work she produced for me the following week where she had misused quotes, and confused the threads of her arguments. I noticed that the phrasiology we had been using had cropped up, but that she had not understood it, or used it in the correct context. I felt awful, in my egerness for a good essay I had been planting ideas which were not hers and left the essay, and the student, confused.The Bedford Guide for Writing Tutors was an incredably useful read, as it helped me identify my faults, and accept them as being common problems, as well as giving me ways of working which left both me and the student getting more out of the sessions.


